Justifiable Haste?

Recap:

Valli, a fortune teller, recounts the intertwined destinies of Narobha, a robber of divine origin, and Tara, forced to marry the tyrant Tungabhadra. Guided by the cunning Brahmin Narayana Bhattar, Narobha seeks power. At a religious gathering orchestrated by Tungabhadra and Mahakala, Narobha becomes obsessed with Queen Tara and plots to assassinate the king with a magical keris.

Chapter 10/26: Justifiable Haste?

Part 1/2 of the novella ‘The cursed keris of Taravati’

Valli sat across from Queen Tara in the war room, the weight of the unfolding narrative filled the room. Tara leaned forward, her gaze fixed on Valli, a storm of emotions – sorrow, anger, and a flicker of grim anticipation – swirling in her eyes. Valli, her own expression a mixture of empathy and the detached observation of a storyteller, continued to weave the fateful events.

“Rani,” Valli began, her voice low and steady, “The fate was relentlessly shaping the path of Narobha, the man unknowingly bound to your destiny. Consumed by his sudden infatuation…”

Narobha did not sleep that night.

The thought, “What a woman she is!” echoed in his mind as he recalled Queen Parvata Vardini. Every movement she made, from the unveiling of the red palanquin to her return inside, remained vivid. Her eyes, reminiscent of newborn chicks, her nose, as delicate as a tender mango, and her lips, the hue of polished carnelian, held him spellbound.

Deprived of sleep, driven by his impulsive mind and unaware of the potential adverse effects, he set out for Panaikulam village early in the morning to meet Maran Saththan, the blacksmith.

“It has been just three months. I asked for a year, did I not? The keris is not fully ready,” Maran expressed his displeasure with Narobha’s impatience and impulsiveness. Such customers were difficult to manage.

“But I am running short of time. Does crafting a keris and chanting a few mantras truly require a year? That’s ridiculous!”

Ahaang. Then go and do it yourself. It is a skill, not as simple as burgling someone’s house,” Maran retorted, turning away and deliberately pricking Narobha’s pride.

Narobha’s anger flared at Maran’s insulting comparison. “What did you say?” he challenged Maran Saththan.

“The truth! A robber is to be called a robber,” Maran shouted back. Driven by impulse and blinded by anger, Narobha seized the half-finished Keris and stabbed Maran, his realization of the gravity of his action coming only afterward.

“What… what have you done? you fool. ” Maran choked out, the pain seizing him. “I tried to help you… why this senseless attack?” His strength failing, he slumped to the workshop floor, his outstretched finger accused Narobha.

“Hear this, Narobha. You came into my workshop, killed me, and stole a half-finished keris. Let me tell you, this keris will kill you. Not only you, it will taste the blood of seven people including you. O God, bring my words to life!” A sudden flash of lightning illuminated the auspicious northeastern sky. Maran Saththan offered a faint smile to Narobha.

Narobha bowed down, collapsed to sit nearby. He struck his forehead with his palm in helplessness and feeling bad about the sin he committed to Maran.

“Hey, Maran… please,” he choked out. “Please take back your words. It was done in anger. I am so .. terribly sorry. I will support for your family. Plea…”. But it was too late. The smile on Maran’s frozen face held a terrifying stillness for Narobha. Unable to bear the overwhelming dread, he fled, running back.

Though the horse was unaware of the murder, Narobha’s terror infected it. Sensing the urgency, and it surged forward, each powerful thud of its hooves sending plumes of dust into the air.

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Note:

  • This fiction is a retelling of a series of historical events.
  • Images generated with ImageFx of Google Gemini.
  • Awkward sentences are removed by AI for a smoother reading experience.

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14 thoughts on “Justifiable Haste?

  1. This chapter felt the most intense by far. The way you’re building suspense around the keris really keeps me hooked. I love how you’re blending legend with character-driven moments—it makes the mystery even more engaging. Can’t wait to see what twists await next!

    • Indeed. When something captures our attention, we often buy it impulsively, right? Like that. I’m eager to continue sharing more. Thank you for reading and supporting me on this A2Z journey. Your appreciation is valued.

  2. Narobha’s impulsive act of stabbing Maran over the unfinished keris was both shocking and heartbreaking. The vivid description of Maran’s dying curse sent chills down my spine—especially the part about the keris tasting the blood of seven people, including Narobha himself. It’s fascinating how the story weaves themes of destiny, ambition, and the consequences of hasty decisions. I could feel Narobha’s remorse and panic as he realized the gravity of his actions. The imagery of the horse sensing his fear and bolting added a cinematic touch to the narrative. Your storytelling is so immersive; I felt like I was right there in the workshop, witnessing the tragedy unfold. I’m intrigued to see how this cursed keris influences the rest of the tale.

    • Even words spoken out of impulsive, though few, can shatter a relationship. Narobha realized the far-reaching impact of such a murder. Your detailed engagement with the chapter motivates me to be more responsible, and I hope the storyline resonates with your satisfaction. Thank you for your constant support. Your appreciation means a lot.

    • Impatience often leads us to ruin things before they are complete, driven by an underlying desire. For Narobha, two desires fuel him: the ambition to rule Taravati and longing to possess Parvata Vardini. What will he do? His path looks to be clear. Despite his fearful escape, he didn’t forget to take the cursed keris.

      didn’t you see the image? I did :). Maran Saththan’s picture was one of my favorites; it turned out well.

      Thank you for your support. I’m very grateful.

    • It cost him dearly before. As the saying goes – ‘From cradle to grave, our early habits follow’. I’m glad you connect with the characters. Thank you for your support.

    • OMG how happy you are!! Please be kind to Narobha! Thank you for enjoying the story and for reading so many chapters in one day as our esteemed guest of Taravati. Thanks for being so kind.

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