Impromptu Errand | Whispers on the Train 9

Recap: Every morning, Jayanthan’s train rattled to a halt at Poongudi, a station that marked the halfway point on his journey to Trichy. But Poongudi wasn’t just another stop – it was where Jyoti, a bright and cheerful hawker, brought a ray of sunshine into his day. Jayanthan, captivated by her smiles and their daily conversations, began to believe a connection was blossoming.

Part 2: Parallel Tracks:

Chapter 9/26: Impromptu Errand

Life is like a pavai koothu puppet show, with time as the puppeteer. Sometimes we dance perfectly, other times we trip and stumble. Maybe these are just tests, like a kind teacher checking if we’ve learned our lessons of being sensible and mature. I’d faced many of them before, and each one left its mark, good or bad.

Words can slip out too fast, like a train on a slippery track. And the regret, oh the regret! It stings like a tiny fishhook stuck in a baby catfish’s jaw. I’d gone over it a million times – ‘what if I said this instead?’ But there’s no rewind button in life. All those doubts churning in my head, just like the catfish fighting the hook. Like that childhood English lesson taught, ‘Will those days come back?’ A chance you grab is a chance you win, but a missed one is gone forever.

Another test was about to begin that day. Jyothi called out to me just as I was heading for the train. I turned, eyebrow raised, a question hanging in the air. What new surprise did Jyothi have in store for me this time?

Suddenly, Jyoti’s eyes lit up. “I just remembered!” she exclaimed, a mischievous glint in her eyes. “Amma needs some special spices for a dish tomorrow. I think we can get all in one place in Trichy market.”

I knew it was unlikely, but her feigned distress resonated with me. A smile played on my lips. “Sounds like a celebration, Jyoti. But who am I to deny a mother’s special request? Why don’t we hop on the train together and see if we can find them?”

The words tumbled out before I could stop them, a foolish invitation hanging in the air. A jolt of regret shot through me. Was this a mistake? My mind raced, the logical part screaming that I had crossed the line, while another, more impulsive voice whispered of adventure with Jyoti. There was no taking back the arrow I’d just fired.

A blush tinged her cheeks, a playful surrender in her eyes. “Perhaps,” she conceded, a smile tugging at the corners of her lips.

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Hidden Laughter Beneath the Banyan | Whispers on the Train 8

Recap: Every morning, Jayanthan’s train rattled to a halt at Poongudi, a station that marked the halfway point on his journey to Trichy. But Poongudi wasn’t just another stop – it was where Jyoti, a bright and cheerful hawker, brought a ray of sunshine into his day. Jayanthan, captivated by her smiles and their daily conversations, began to believe a connection was blossoming.

Part 2: Parallel Tracks:

Chapter 8/26: Hidden Laughter Beneath the Banyan

The warm morning hum of the train was shattered by a sudden jolt and screech. We ground to a halt in Poongudi, apparently due to some trouble. Passengers grumbled around me, frustrated by the delay. Ahmed, ever the grump, muttered “I’ll give the loco pilot a piece of my mind someday”.

Rajan, unable to resist a dig, hopped off first. “Think you can manage, Ahmed, with that belly of yours?” he teased with a smirk.

Ahmed scowled. Lately, he’d started walking with Mrs. Mangalam on the platform for two reasons. One, to escape Rajan’s constant jabs. Two, because it gave Jyoti a chance to slip into the vacant seat beside me, after finishing her own errands.

Our friends, bless them, always seemed to give us some privacy. It had gotten ridiculous, though. I couldn’t focus on anything unless I saw Jyoti’s face and chatted with her for a bit, twice a day. Weekends, without those chats, felt like endless stretches of empty time.

I’d even thought about visiting her village, by bus or motorbike (Our train will take off on weekends), but the idea filled me with a strange nervousness. Did I even deserve someone like Jyoti, with my shyness and daydreams?

Those stolen moments on the train were my most precious. Simple things – little gifts (mostly snacks!), shy smiles, and whispered talks about things we both liked – filled me with a quiet joy.

Jyoti’s eyes always fascinated me. One moment they’d be sharp and focused, like they were trying to see right through me. Then, in a blink, they’d transform into a dazzling smile that made my heart race.

The train whistle was our usual goodbye signal. Jyoti would wave, I’d nod back. Once, feeling playful, I mimicked her wave with a silly bobble-head dance, like those Thanjavur-dolls. Jyoti, ever the good sport, just swatted my shoulder playfully before hopping off.

These little rituals played out in our train compartment, the windows always open to the world, yet somehow creating our own little universe.

But today, Jyoti, with her usual sunny smile and basket in hand, did something different. Instead of sitting next to me, she just gave me a knowing look and stepped off the train.

“Wanna stretch your legs?” Jyoti grinned at me, while standing at the gravel in the midst of the tracks.

I hesitated, then followed her lead. We wandered under the shade of a sprawling banyan tree, the sunlight filtering through the leaves.

“Reminds me of my childhood,” Jyoti sighed, closing her eyes. “We used to play hide-and-seek here.”

I smiled, the playful spirit sparking in me. “Let’s recreate it then!”

Jyoti’s eyes widened playfully. “What? now? with you? You’re crazy!” Jyoti pretended aggravation, bumping her shoulder playfully against mine.

Our laughter echoed through the quiet station as we walked together and settled on the roots of the century old tree.

“This is nice,” I remarked, gazing at her. “A break from the usual routine.”

“Exactly,” she replied, her eyes meeting mine. “Sometimes, all we need is a different perspective.” A blush crept up her cheeks as our eyes met.

Our conversation subsided, replaced by a comfortable silence. The playful energy lingered, the lonely interaction beneath the banyan tree weaving a new thread into the fabric of our connection. As the train whistle announced its departure, I regret at returning to the usual rush.

Waving goodbye, I wondered what Jyothi was thinking. Her voice, breaking the silence, called, “Jayantha…”

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Glowing Glimmer | Whispers on the Train 7

Recap: Jayanthan, Mrs. Mangalam etc. are all passengers on a morning train bound for Trichy, their workplace. Jyoti, a cheerful hawker at Poongudi station, brightened their day. Her wit and warmth of her smile lingered in Jayanthan’s mind.

Part 1: Coupling Signals

Chapter 7: Glowing Glimmer

My day had been long, filled with the drudgery of my factory job, a stark contrast to the vibrant life Jyoti brought to my mornings.

It took an unexpected turn when the boss summoned me to a client meeting. I found myself thrust into the world of negotiation. I assisted him throughout, fetching documents, quotes, and explaining samples, needless to say, it was tiresome.

The meeting, a first for me, felt grand with his polite introductions. Yet, the ruthless negotiator emerged when pricing was discussed. His fierce style made me fear for the deal, adding to the weight of recent lost tenders.

Later, over lunch at the food court, I voiced my concern. “Business is business,” he stated matter-of-factly. We can’t afford to be Santa Claus, can we?” he said with a wink. “Seriously though, a good price gives us some breathing room. You wouldn’t want your salary deducted because of your faulty measurements on a project, would you?” I could only manage a grin.

He dropped me at the bus stop, and I raced to catch the train, worried about missing both my connection and my evening chat with Jyoti. The warm glow of conversation with Jyoti had become a cherished part of my recent evenings.

Relief washed over me as I secured a seat in the bus. But as it sped on, the weather mirrored my growing anxiety. Rain started drumming on the roof, each drop echoing my worry about missing the train.

By the time I reached the station, a downpour had begun. I dashed through the underpass and lunged for the departed train. Drenched and breathless, I collapsed onto my seat next to Rajan. The rain intensified, blurring the world outside.

A frantic energy filled the compartment as passengers rushed to shut windows, the rhythmic clatter of latches the only sound competing with the drumming rain. Soon, all the windows were sealed tight, the once-breezy compartment morphing into a suffocating cocoon. Glancing around at the sweat-slicked faces, I couldn’t help but feel like we were crammed inside a fuming brick-furnace.

Reaching my familiar station, the village lights twinkled like scattered stars. A loneliness struck – no Jyoti in sight. But then, amidst the passengers, a splash of color caught my eye. Jyoti, a firefly in that gloomy evening, stood with a warm smile illuminating her face, with a basket overflowing with jasmine flowers, her stock-in-trade for the evenings.

“Good evening, Mr. Inspector!” she called out, voice, warm and familiar, cut through the village’s quietude. I looked up, surprised to see her not just holding a steaming teacup, but already halfway settled on the empty seat beside me.

Ready for another round of quality control?” she teased, a playful glint in her eyes. The close proximity sent a jolt through me, a pleasant warmth spreading across my chest. I stammered a reply, “Always, Master Chef.” I chuckled, taking a sip of the warm tea. “Thanks, Jyoti. This tea is wonderful! It smells amazing. I wouldn’t have expected tea from you, though.”

“Made with extra love, especially for my most discerning inspector.” she beamed, scooting closer on the bench, her shoulder brushing his briefly. “So, what do you usually do in Trichy?”

Thus began an unexpected conversation. We talked about my job, my dreams of pursuing photography, and her passion for cooking. She shared stories of her family, her struggles, and her hopes for the future. I, in turn, opened up about my loneliness in the town, my longing for connection.

As the train rumbled on, the rain outside gradually subsided, mirroring the calmness spreading within me. We laughed, we confided, secrets whispered, and vulnerabilities shared. A sense of belonging bloomed between us, a connection that transcended the familiar rhythm of the train and hinted at a future filled with possibilities.

End of Part 1: Coupling Signals

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Fluttering Hearts | Whispers on the Train 6

Recap: Jayanthan, Mrs. Mangalam etc. are all passengers on a morning train bound for Trichy, their workplace. Jyoti, a cheerful hawker at Poongudi station, brightened their day. Jayanthan’s sarcastic remark about Jyoti’s cooking helped them connect.

Part 1: Coupling Signals

Chapter 6: Fluttering Hearts

The train rumbled steadily towards Trichy, aiming to make up for lost time at Poongudi. A mynah, above the paddy fields, caught my eye, soaring high before dipping sharply. My thoughts drifted, drawn to Jyoti. I’d known her for a few years now, and while our conversations were rare, I was familiar with her quick wit and playful teasing. But our interactions over the past two days had sparked something new within me, a fluttering sensation like a sunbird trapped in my chest.

A smile tugged at my lips as I recalled our playful banter earlier that day.

Today’s encounter left me flustered. When she quipped, “Well, someone had to appreciate my culinary skills after yesterday’s disaster,” with a wink, I couldn’t help but feel like I’d been doused with a bucket of Pavala Malli1.

I could not stop smiling then and I declared to her “That settles it then,” my voice thick with amusement.

“From now on, I’ll be your official sambar quality control inspector. And just to warn you, my standards are very high.”

Her eyes sparkled with mischief. “Challenge accepted, Inspector Jayanthan! But beware, even watery sambar can be addictive, especially when paired with Master Chef Jyoti’s recipe.”

We both dissolved into laughter, the gentle hum of the overhead fans providing a steady rhythm to our lighthearted wordplay. And for the first time, the watery sambar didn’t matter. Because amidst the laughter and a warm luminescence of her smile, like a brass lamp casting a gentle glow, I found a flavor far more delicious – the taste of our connection.

Mrs. Mangalam, sipping her tea from a nearby seat, smiled warmly. The twinkle in her eyes spoke volumes of unspoken approval. This budding connection, blossoming like a jasmine beneath the train’s watchful gaze, filled her heart with quiet joy.

Thinking about Jyoti was like sinking into a hive of velvet beetles. The way she patted my shoulder so mischievously replayed in my mind. It was a touch so light, so unexpected, yet it echoed like a phantom sensation. Could fingers truly be that soft? So evocative? So bewitching? The rhythmic clatter of the train faded into the background, replaced by a dull thrumming in my chest. What was happening to me?

The warmth of the memory lingered, even as the train’s ear-splitting whistle jolted me back to the present, announcing our arrival in Trichy.

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  1. Pavala malli or Parijat or Parijatam or Night-blooming jasmine is a species of Nyctanthes native to South Asia and Southeast Asia ↩︎

Early Bird Delights | Whispers on the Train 5

Recap: Jayanthan, Mrs. Mangalam etc. are all passengers on a morning train bound for Trichy, their workplace. They encounter Jyoti, a friendly and talkative vendor, at Poongudi station, on the way. Jayanthan’s sarcastic remark about Jyoti’s cooking offended her.

Part 1: Coupling Signals

Chapter 5: Early Bird Delights

The next morning, as Mrs. Mangalam and I began our walk along the platform, Ahmed caught up to us. It felt awkward. Mrs. Mangalam shot me a questioning look, her eyebrows raised high. I shrugged helplessly.

Suddenly, we saw a flash of something shiny. Tucked into Ahmed’s belt was a brand-new Walkman. With a flourish, he adjusted the headphones, wrapping them around his head before plugging the jack into the stereo slot.

“Hey, nice new Walkman, buddy!” I exclaimed, unable to contain my curiosity.

Rajan, puffing on a cigarette nearby, chuckled. “The fox coming to town is bad enough, but to howl on top of it?” His comment was laced with good-natured teasing.

Mrs. Mangalam burst into laughter, the sound echoing across the platform. “Now we know why you were so eager to join our walk,” she said, her eyes twinkling.

Ahmed, feigning hurt, protested, “Ma, no! It’s not showing off, really. It’s just like…” he stammered, searching for the right words.

“Mm hmm, okay, okay,” Mrs. Mangalam conceded with a playful smile. “A new toy. You want to enjoy it. Like a curious child, I understand.”

It was an AIWA Walkman, a treasure Ahmed likely captured it from Burma Bazaar in Trichy, a place known for its smuggled goods from Malaysia and Singapore. I tried it as we commenced our walk. The first listen was pure bliss. Ilayaraja’s melody poured through the headphones, rich and clear. The 3-band equalizer worked its magic, enriching the sound to a whole new level. In that moment, I knew I had to get one myself, if I could save up enough.

When we return to our seats, a surprise awaited me. A steaming idly packet adorned with a single, glittering jasmine bud sat on my seat. “Special idlis,” Jyoti announced, a playful glint in her eyes. “For someone who appreciates good sambar, especially after a bad breakfast yesterday.”

My cheeks felt warm under her gaze. “Thank you,” I stammered, the words tumbling out clumsily. “These look amazing, and with that fancy jasmine on top… I feel special.”

Jyoti chuckled, a melody that danced through the bustling compartment. “Well, someone had to appreciate my culinary skills after yesterday’s disaster,” she winked. “Watery sambar might sound strange, but it lets me offer delicious idly-s at a price everyone can enjoy. Win-win, Isn’t it?”

A playful question mark materialized between my brows. “Does that mean you’re planning to charge me double for this privilege?”

Her laughter erupted, as sunshine streaming through our house’s eastern door. It was a sound that could chase away any monsoon grumpiness, and I couldn’t help but grin. “Oh no, Mr. High Standards,” she teased, tapping my shoulder with mock sternness. “For you, it’s always complimentary watery sambar. Consider it a special discount for early risers with sophisticated taste buds.”

The light tap, though playful, sent a lovable warmth through me, a warmth that lingered long after the semaphore clanged, signaling the train’s departure.

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Downpour Disappointment | Whispers on the Train 4

Recap: Jayanthan, Rajan, Ahmed, and Mrs. Mangalam are all passengers on a morning train bound for Trichy, their workplace. They encounter Jyoti, a friendly and talkative vendor, at Poongudi station, where the train is usually delayed as it waits for another one.

Part 1: Coupling Signals

Chapter 4: Downpour Disappointment

One monsoon morning, the rain came down hard above our town. Heavy rain lashed down, getting me completely wet before I could even reach the train. My packed-breakfast, sadly, became a mushy, unappetitable casualty of the downpour.

As the train reached Poongudi, hunger haunted me. With a sheepish nod, I approached Jyoti, her presence momentarily erasing the rain’s gloom.

“One idly packet, please,” I mumbled, avoiding her gaze.

“Morning rough?” she asked, her voice surprisingly gentle.

My stomach gurgled in response. As I paid, I stole a peek – her hands danced expertly, flipping idly packets inside the basket, her eyes sparkling with mischief even as she chatted with customers.

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Unwrapping the idly, I expected the usual burst of flavor. The sambar was like a watery soup, lacking the usual depth and complexity. Disappointment welled up, and I turned to Mrs. Mangalam, forgetting Jyoti stood right behind me. “Perhaps,” I made a wit, unable to resist a sarcastic comment, “the downpour was heavy inside the sambar and chutney pot too.”

A worried note crept into her voice as she asked from behind, “Is something wrong?”

The blood drained on my face. Jyoti stood as a silent witness to my complaint. I hadn’t meant to involve her, especially not after her kindness that morning. Swallowing my disappointment, I mumbled to Mrs. Mangalam, “Actually, it’s alright. Maybe I just need some…” I trailed off, searching for an alternative that wouldn’t hurt Jyoti’s feelings.

The silence stretched, heavy with the rain pounding on the roof.

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Comfort in Chaos | Whispers on the Train 3

Recap: Jayanthan, Rajan, Ahmed, and Mrs. Mangalam are all passengers on a morning train bound for Trichy, their workplace. Their train stops for an extended period at Poongudi station every day to allow another train to cross.

Part 1: Coupling Signals

Chapter 3: Comfort in Chaos

The Poongudi station was my familiar pause, a chance to stretch my legs and exchange the rhythmic lull of the passenger train for the melodic chaos of the platform. The breeze from the river, nearby, convinced us to forgive the delay of the Indian railway and its crossing.

Mrs Mangalam used that waiting period to do a walking on the railway platform. I used to accompany her to enjoy the breeze and give ears to my mentor. I used to share the challenges I face while working a temporary job at a small spare parts supplier of BHEL. She used to insist to leverage my diploma and seek better prospects in other cities. Whether I obey or not, she kept me motivated whenever I was down.

That day unfolded with the usual vendors sell their goods in a buzzing voice. The fellow passengers murmured among themselves. The wind blew gently, carrying the scent of the paddy fields and river.

Amidst the quietude, a familiar sight emerged – Jyoti, a burst of sunshine in a sea of grey, her smile cutting through the glooms like a ray of warmth. Unlike the other stall owners hawking their items, she stormed through the carriages, with a basket with freshly steamed idli-s and a jasmine blossom tucked behind her neatly combed and braided hair.

Her presence, as always, chased away the remnants of the morning chill, now accompanied by the soft chirping of sunbirds. Her smile was as warm as the rising sun, and her laughter as sharp as the pennies in her cash box.

Though tempted by her idli-s and its aroma sang a siren song to my grumbling stomach, I usually hold onto my packed breakfast. She greeted me with a mischievous glint in her eyes, her voice dripping with mock disappointment, “Home food today also, huh? If you’re such a mama’s boy, how will us get rich, eh?”. Her voice dripped with playful honey, a stark contrast to the fishhook that followed. She turned to Mrs. Mangalam, “Amma, here you are, cleaning your spectacles again? Winter dryness, my dear, not your bad eyesight!” Her laughter, warm and infectious, filled the air. Then, she moved on to the next carriage, leaving a silence, like the hush that follows a downpour.

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Broke by the Crossing | Whispers on the Train 2

Recap: Jayanthan, Rajan, Ahmed, and Mrs. Mangalam are all passengers on a morning train bound for Trichy, their workplace. As they wait for the train to arrive at their destination, they like to chit-chat on the platform.

Part 1: Coupling Signals

Chapter 2: Broke by the Crossing

As the train arrived, we usually board the first compartment, after the ladies’ coach for a quicker exit at Trichy. Mrs. Mangalam and Rajan preferred the front seats, while Ahmed and I sat opposite, continuing our lively banter, as the train transitioned from the platform to the main track with the gentle sway of a bamboo branch dancing in a breeze.

“For this short trip, we’re stuck on this train for two hours?” Ahmed muttered, starting a new topic.

“Take the bus, then,” I retorted playfully. “But triple the cost of your railway pass, mind you.”

“This train usually flies, Jayanthan.” Mrs. Mangalam interjected me, a hint of annoyance in her voice. “But the crossing at Poongudi takes forever. Which train waits for forty minutes for another, tell me? We could be in Trichy by then!”

The train whistled, entering Poongudi station. “See,” Mrs. Mangalam sighed, “Sidelined again. Looks like we’re waiting today also.” As Ahmed and Rajan rose to stretch their legs, and getting ready to get down, the train came to a halt.

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Amber Embrace and Emerald Fields (Whispers on the Train 1)

Part 1: Coupling Signals

Chapter 1: Amber Embrace and Emerald Fields

The rhythmic beats of the passenger train was my daily lullaby, carrying me to Trichy at each sunrise and dropping me back after every sunset. On those foggy mornings, it slowly sliced through the mist like a baby millipede, revealing the lush green and emerald embrace of the paddy fields that looks to the sky. During winter, the sunlight struggled to pierce the dense fog, casting a fresh-lemon glow on the fields divided by a bund full of palm trees with rusted-iron-like trunk. In the distance, where the fields met the horizon, a glimmer of water danced in the sunlight.

But my daily lullaby didn’t just lull me to sleep; it also woke me up, its steady grumble serving as my alarm clock as I stood on the platform of that small station. The paddy fields, so serene in the distance, their earthy scent mingling with the aroma of coffee nuts brewing in a nearby stall.

A seasoned poster advertising Reliance Mobile’s ‘Connecting India‘ swayed on the platform. “Land lines and PCO booths are fading away. Imagine everyone with these little gadgets in a few years, But Nokia is the leader of the Indian market. How this Dhirubhai Ambani will win it with his LG phone?” I mused, pointing at the sleek phone in the poster. The inflowing clatter of the train echoed our conversation as we waited to board.

Ahmed made fun playfully, “Hoy Jayanthan! Fancy that? But who can afford them? Rumor says their bills are sky-high!”

Rajan, usually quiet, piped up, his eyes twinkling with mischief, “High bills? Why worry when ‘Taal‘ movie costs 300 bucks in the black market, and you don’t hesitate to pay! Aishwarya Rai is a sight for sore eyes, I hear.” He giggled at Ahmed – a hardcore Aishwarya Rai fan – who watched the ‘Taal‘ movie on first-day-first-show, the previous day.

Mrs. Mangalam, her wisdom radiating through the warm smile playing on her lips, chuckled, “Woah, woah, easy there, young man. We all know you’ve got Aishwarya posters plastered all over your room. But seriously, black market tickets? And talk about sky-high cell phone bills, ah? Wait a bit, Ahmed. The price might drop faster”. She tried to defend Ahmed to Rajan “But you see, Rajan! Besides, haven’t you watch ‘Hum Dil Se Chuki Sanam‘ yet? It was a masterpiece, and Aishwarya stole the show, no doubt.”

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(Translated Tamil Story) சூலித்தெருவில் ஒரு சிறுவன் | Suchita Agarwal

As the weekend approaches, it is time to take a break from the hustle and bustle of everyday life and enjoy a few moments of peace and relaxation. For those of us who are looking for something a little more interesting than the usual weekend activities, I have a story for you that is sure to captivate readers of all ages.

This week I came across Suchita’s story that takes place in a typical crowded street of rural India. It tells the tale of a young boy who has a chance encounter with an old woman. Through their conversation, the we learn valuable life lessons that will stay with us forever.

I was so moved by this story that I wanted to share it with the world, so I reached out to the author and asked for permission to translate it and share it with a larger audience. Thankfully, Sahana was kind enough to help me out and publish the story.

So this Saturday, I invite you to take a break and read Suchita’s story. I promise it will be time well-spent. Enjoy!

English: ‘The old woman’s good fortune

Tamil: சூலித்தெருவில் ஒரு சிறுவன்

About Author: Suchita Agarwal

(in author’s own words..)

I am a writer. At different times, I have been a teacher, an agency recruit, a master’s degree holder, and a social media executive. All work as secret identities for my plan to takeover the literary world…one post, one manuscript, one book deal at a time. What I love above all else are desserts, reading and learning.

Currently working with Blogchatter where we help connect brands and bloggers through our community-based platform.

Author’s blog – talesofsuchita.com

If you wish to connect her, send an email at: suchita@theblogchatter.com.